Re: Moscow Schools

[curley@CYPHER.TURBONET.COM]

The statement as drafted sounds less positive to me than I would hope 
for.  There are poor investments and good investments, but aside from 
that, I think I would like something in the statement about what we 
expect or hope the investment will do--how it will or can be used.  
Also, "invest" suggests to me a deposit of some kind rather than an 
active or interactive mission.  

I regret not being able to craft a trenchant sentence in 
substitution, but I think I would brainstorm with active words like 
develop, teach, provide, lead, direct and maybe modifiers like 
competent, effective, capable, creative, resourceful, or qualified.

Thanks for being gracious enough to submit the question to Vision 
2020. I appreciate the information and being included in the process.
 

Mike Curley